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In an advance technology society, industrial waste causes a huge problem for the environment in the world. Nowadays, many countries use the zero waste and landfilling methods as a solution to clean up the waste. When comparing the two methods, the advantages of using zero waste method to reduce industrial waste make it the better choice.
Zero waste is the system where recycling, reuse is used, while landfilling is the system which dump the waste into the land. Although we know that industrial waste is being dumped 100 meters below the land, waste still can leak out anytime in the future. The waste that leak out will lead to the risk of human health. However, using zero waste method is guaranteed to be safe because recycling is the main key in the system. Due the design of the system, only product that can be reuse or recycle included in the system. In the economic point of view, zero waste has decreased the production of waste but it help country to save more moneys. While in landfilling, it does not help country to save money and it further cause more problem in the future due to the limited land in the country.
In conclusion, zero waste is the better choice to clean waste compare to using landfills. Since technology is so great in today’s life, why don’t we use our technology to solve the industrial waste problem instead of dumping the waste to our own land?